Spirited Enterprise

I can't really offer insight on your bonding ritual as I am not a magic worker, and believe that bonding is probably personal between each person and their spirit. Did you write that for yourself or are you writing it as instructions for others? Mother Moon has given us a bonding ritual in a different post in this forum, and that is what I will choose to use when I bond with my dragon. It almost sounds as if you are writing this ritual so that you can sell spirits yourself??? Many of us are just as new to you as spirits and magic, so maybe you should just message Mother Moon privately to ask about the ritual you have written above?